Draft of Public Argument

In this blog post, I will include a hyperlink to my first draft of my public argument. I will also be  addressing my potential peer-reviewers as to what to expect when reading this.

As I have written this draft, and as I am about to publish this, I am in no means done with my work. I have a lot to do--citations, photos, revisions of grammar and spelling, etc., but also content. I am not thrilled with what my content turned out to be. I was headed in the right direction, but I got a little side-tracked to my overall purpose in writing. I hope I can reconnect with that in my revision process.

Quinn Dombrowski. "Over-the-top scare quotes." 03/20/2008 via Flickr.
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I have a lot of loose ends that need to be tied up, and I am already aware of the awful conclusion that I have currently (give me some grace.) Some questions that need to be answered, however, include: do I sound too informal? does my document resemble an editorial? do my ideas add up to a general purpose or conclusion?

Let me know what you think, but be gentle.


--Jenny Bello