I am somewhat proud of this, however there are many, MANY things I am unsure of and need to revise. Overall, my points are what I am proud of, but I do not know if my execution or illustration of these points is good enough. Also, I tried to incorporate and keep my own audience engaged, but I am not sure if I did that either. Was it interesting? Was it engaging? If not, please let me know some suggestions that I should be doing to achieve this goal. But my main concern is whether or not I fulfilled the assignment--I think I did, I am just not so sure. Let me know any suggestions or ideas, but keep in mind, this is a rough draft.
Rhetorical Analysis for "Pay Teachers More"
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Sebastian Wiertz. "Drafting." 03/4/2012 via Flickr. Attribution 2.0 Generic License. |
--Jenny Bello
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